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WOULDN’T IT BE NICE
Wouldn’t it be nice if we could both just live in joy each day And share that joy with each other. Being appreciative of all that we have And share that appreciation with each other. Wouldn’t it be nice if our deep love for each other Promoted unconditional love and trust. That no matter what is said or done Is always done or said in love and trust. Wouldn’t it be nice to know that we live in the security Between us as to our love and trust for each other. To live in that secure knowing that mother and child Reside as one thought of love and trust for each other. Wouldn’t it be nice to know that whatever may come in our lives That we could always share that with one another. Knowing that the other would always lift us up By their love and trust. Wouldn’t it be nice to know that we are in the same vibration Of just loving and trusting each other along the way. For in that knowing there would ever be the thought Of love and trust in every day. Wouldn’t it be nice to share the rest of our years together Sharing all that we have come to know. Supporting each other in our own personal lessons Teaching each other all along the way. Wouldn’t it be nice to know that we have an advocate No matter what life presents before us. To know that we have the best of friend Who’ll be there with us through thick and thin. Wouldn’t it be nice to just rest in that knowing That we can just share. All that we are or ever hope to be And just be enjoyed for who we truly are. Wouldn’t it be nice… We create our own reality! It's all a matter of choice! Life is Good! Belief Becomes!
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It would be nice if we could know the difference Between what we want and what we need! Then we could expend our energies on what matters Instead of meaningless banalities It would be nice if we could really be there For those who are in dire need For those who are alone and sick and homeless Who cannot help themselves in midst of chaos. It would be nice,a fine expression, Has only one uncertainty of thinking: The conditional implied by "would"! So that our "woulds" can be enabled. May we start to see the future And change these "woulds" to "cans" and "wills" Yes, it will be nice when we come together In Peace and Love and Harmony! Yes it can if we are willing, To seek out the future we wish to see! Nori 2005 - We are sitting under the tree of our thinking minds, wondering why we're not getting any sunshine! -Ram Dass- "One liners" |
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Hey Nori, Nori,
Thank you so much for responding to my poem. It gave me great interest, your perception of "would". It made me further define my intent behind the phrase "Wouldn't it Be Nice". I see "would" as an offer, an invitation Without conditions in anyway. To me, "Wouldn't it be nice" Is looking at situations in the best That they can possibly be. In this reference, coming from where I am Will and can are demands and are to me conditional. But in using "would" designates the possibilities If two entities work together to make the best That it can be, it can be. I can only speak for myself And express what I think and feel Would be the best a relationship can evolve. I cannot put my "conditions" on another As to what it can be or will be. So, in my intent of this poem It is the intent of offering or an invitation To experience a relationship in the best that it can be. Leaving ample opportunity for the other to decide if they should agree. There are no conditions For the other may not see my impressions As the best that it could be For I cannot control another's impressions. Anyway, thank you. It really helped me to define My intent behind this writing. Love, Deb We create our own reality! It's all a matter of choice! Life is Good! Belief Becomes!
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Oh sure! Dear Deb, I realized your intent My playful answer is simply another way To interpret the "would". The French have a usage for that invitational "would" It is a suggestion, a question in the negative I am a linguist and often the words jump out at me and then I am off on a version of my own! It is a pleasure to read your reaction and I honor your feelings so beautifully expressed here. Wouldn't it be nice if we could meet someday And share- in spoken words- that which we now must write? Wouldn't it be nice to have the time to think and write whenever we wanted.... whatever we wanted...... Wouldn't it be nice ........ OM Love, NoriroN - We are sitting under the tree of our thinking minds, wondering why we're not getting any sunshine! -Ram Dass- "One liners" |
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NoriroN - I really like that
Like a mirror image of ourselves. Let's see what would mine be? DebeD - Nori Ron and Deb Ed! Now isn't that interesting? I think we've just balanced our yin/yang!!! That is really thought provoking - ahhaha!!! Seriously, your added perceptions of "would" Really gave me food for thought And I love that. Very clever of you. Made me wonder if my mother Will perceive my intent behind my words Or if her perception will differ. Well, we shall see. And yes, it would be nice If we could one day meet And share in person. That would be nice, indeed. Don't forget to bring the cookies!!!! Love ya, Deb We create our own reality! It's all a matter of choice! Life is Good! Belief Becomes!
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Hi there:
Thank-you! This poem IS me and Peter - wholefully, truthfully... and No What Ifs... If he decided to end this , I would be greatly saddened, but would hope he finds whatever it is that would make him completely whole - whether another woman, or whatever his journey on this Earth Plane would take him too... As for every man I have been with, he has been there for me...in so many ways...and our arguments and there have been about 3 - have always been resolved to the quickest... Thank-you for these lovely thoughts you have so graciously shared... Azure Eloise/2005 |
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Hi Eli,
Thank you so much for your response To my poem. Yes, I, too, reside in the essence of this poem With my dear friend, OneLight and my son So, we know it is possible Therefore my wish That we would experience this with Others in our lives Whether it be mate, partner, friend, Parent, child, employer, employee. And, one by one We could extend that To communities, to our government To the interchange of nations. It begins one on one. One can offer, but the offer has to be accepted. It is a unified direction That cannot be obtained Unless both parties are willing. But it has to begin, to start somewhere And it is in our willingness Each and everyone of us Is where it begins and then Spreads, and spreads and spreads. It is in our willingness to give up defense And to promote cooperation Wherein we will find That it can and will become. A unified nation, a unified world A unified universe It all begins with one on one. Well thank you for prompting me To voice my heart It is always in the sharing That we find ourselves. Love to you and your Peter, To the whole planet, universe, Deb We create our own reality! It's all a matter of choice! Life is Good! Belief Becomes!
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Hi Nori:
Just a quick note that I went over your website..it is really cool! I loved the poetry featured, tho' some of it is in Creativity...and I loved the pix of the cats! I have a beautiful Tuxedo cat now...I found her walking around in an AlleyWay and picked her up...I fear she may have been abused, as she is very fast to snarl, and fast to bite (and not those little cat love bites either), and she is a fast scratcher... When I leave her alone for a couple of days and come home she comes right up to me and meows, rubs herself up against my legs and when I pick her up she actually kisses me on my lips - though some would say 'Yuck, cat germs'... I don't see it that way...but I am rambling... I really enjoyed the visit and recommend it to other members if they are interested... Take it easy now Azure Eloise/2005 ...hot, hot sizzling hot...so hot you can fry an egg on a rock... |
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I meet you in this sacred place.
Love Electra Heart |
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Hi Nori,
"Oh sure! Dear Deb, I realized your intent My playful answer is simply another way To interpret the "would". The French have a usage for that invitational "would" It is a suggestion, a question in the negative." That's fascinating. I do know that in the German language there are several words that can be translated as "love" but all three express a different type of love. That's something we have difficulty with in the English language. This thread is really great. I'm reading it with great interest. {'bet ya' thought I'd dun disappeared from Creativity but I 'aint ![]() Love, LL
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